1908.23 – DDOP.23 – Cheesecake

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#Audio. #shortshort An exercise in 3rd person omniscient storytelling.

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Claudia looked around. “You’re my last customer,” she said. “Wait a moment.” She left his side and went to lock the doors and flip the signs from OPEN to CLOSED. Then she went behind the bar and made her own drink, and also served a slice of cheesecake, returning to his table with drink, dessert, and two forks. “Share this with me?” she invited settling into the chair opposite his

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  • The Bathtub Mermaid: Tales from the Tub is written and produced by Melissa A. Bartell, and is recorded and produced using the BossJock iPad app and Audacity.
  • Bathtub Mermaid album art was created by Rebecca Moran of Moran Media
  • Music used for the opening and closing is a mix of Chris Zabriskie’s “The Oceans Continue to Rise” from the Free Music Archive and Kevoy’s clip of whales off the coast of French Polynesia from Freesound.
  • Chris Zabriskie’s song is also used under some readings.

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One thought on “1908.23 – DDOP.23 – Cheesecake

  1. You set thecscene perfectly. I could see the cafe, smell the coffee and taste the creamy rich cheesecake.
    Thankfully this ended happily, I thought that’s the man was a serial killer!

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